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Predictable Unreliability

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Laughter will come soonest after tears
Just as dawn will break a night of fears
Just as night will fade and turn to day
I will come and soothe your tears away

In this endless loop of Life and Death
Best will follow worst, so save your breath
Though deepest dark may threaten to surround
There's always light just waiting to be found

I cannot pretend to know it all
For pride will constantly precede a fall
Yet in this world where opposites hold reign
I hope to someday see you once again
huh... don't know about the last stanza... odds are I'm going to submit this to RawEmotion's 'laughter as medicine' theme, although it doesn't seem to fit... hmmm... not so sure about the title either... why is this one such a pain? =P
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LadyofGaerdon's avatar
This is quite good. I's suggested replacing "will follow" with "follows" in this sentece "Best will follow worst, so save your breath" in order to improve flow, though.

I really like how some of the words are commonly used, yet the way in which they used are fresh and original. Very nice. :thumbsup: